Haunting childhood memories

by tyanna   Mar 19, 2007


She grew up in a house,
it was far from a home.
It wasn't filled with love and laughter,
she was always all alone.

She heard the screams so clearly,
and saw the tears so often.
She would sit in her room at night,
wishing for a different life.

Eight years later and she's still searching,
trying so desperately to find the light.
But there's depression, anger, hate and rage,
Pain so intense....this will never change.

**please vote and leave comments! I would like to know what everyone thinks!**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    This poem was really good. I liked what you did with just a very vague subject like a house. I also liked how you left what really happened up to the imagination of the reader and didnt tell them everything, thats a tallent. Nice job, thanx for sharing it with us all.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    This is so deep. defiantly a great job you did with writing it. keep it up! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    This will never change. = it will never be right (?)

    I actually found very few errors on this poem, of which I am very pleased. The poem was touching, and even though small I did enjoy it.

    I hope this is not a true story, and there isn't much to say about this poem.

    Oh, this part:

    *and say the tears so often.*

    I'm not really sure about that. Is "say" supposed to be "saw"

    Oh well.

    Good write dear.

    Onto your next.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    :O wow thats such an amzing poem. well done, i hope things get better for you, its very emotional and strong to read. its good keep writing please x x x x x x x

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