Made For Each Other

by aDORKable x3   Mar 20, 2007


A silent tear streams down her cheek
Fighting to be strong; accepting she's weak
Another one follows, until she can count no more
Her teary-eyed stare catches her drawer

A shudder, through her body, as she remembers what's inside
The pain she's holding close, she can no longer hide
She slowly gets up and opens the drawer
Hands shaking, she drops the notes on the floor

Collecting her wits as with all of the notes
She sits back down to look at what he wrote
All the memories come back and she's taken into the past
Back to a time when she thought they would last

As she reread the notes, the tears still dropped
She knew that the steam would never be stopped
After fighting the tears, she gave up, in vain
She knew there was no way to stop the pain

The folded notes, crease folded and torn
With letters and words, faded by worn
Each note, holding its own time frame
Each ending, showing the same exact name

''With Love'' or ''Yours''; endings meaning nothing now
Wishing things were different; wondering how
Wasted words, left nothing to be found
Wondering what life would be if he was around

Tears still flowing as she puts the notes back
Feeling in her heart, the place where she lacks
So as she sites back down, you can barely hear her mutter:
''But baby, I thought we were Made For Each Other.''

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Made For Each Other; By: Ciao - Now Darling, you know that I have always loved your work and here is just another example of why I do...you are very talented and although there are still a few things here and there that people will rag on you about, it will improve you and you are still young and able to improve...I think you can go very far with your writing. This poem really made me think of how silly us girls aer to re-read the old love notes thinking we were meant to be with every jerk we ever fell for lol, I love this one, it's one of my favorites. Iheartchuu.
SPELLING - 2.5/3
CONTENT - 5/5
GRAMMAR - 5/5
FLOW - 4.5/5
TOTAL - 17/18
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First place... =] iloversyoujenna!!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Once again I am amzed withur work.. I loved everysingle one! good job.. you are very talented at heart! I hope you never forget that and never stop writing good job and keep it up well done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wonderful write. The rhymes where good as well as the flow. Like I said before you tend you use the rhyming scheme aabb, you should try switching it up sometimes maybe do a rhyming scheme of abab. Over all great poem.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by LoNeLy SoUL

    Love really hurts.. but love will also make us pick our shatterd life..

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Ooh that was powerful i really liked it
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Ciao Darling! You commented on one of mine so I decided to repay you and this one took my breath away. I do that all the time...reread old notes or letters or emails or even text messages so I could relate to this poem really well. I haven't read any of your work in a long time, but my lord you really are improving Dear!

    The ending wrapped it up perfectly, it's the typical teenage girl poem, and I love it! I adore this piece, I give it a 5/5 :D