by aDORKable x3 Mar 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
A silent tear streams down her cheek |
Once again I am amzed withur work.. I loved everysingle one! good job.. you are very talented at heart! I hope you never forget that and never stop writing good job and keep it up well done 5/5 |
Wonderful write. The rhymes where good as well as the flow. Like I said before you tend you use the rhyming scheme aabb, you should try switching it up sometimes maybe do a rhyming scheme of abab. Over all great poem. |
by LoNeLy SoUL
Love really hurts.. but love will also make us pick our shatterd life.. |
Ooh that was powerful i really liked it |
Ciao Darling! You commented on one of mine so I decided to repay you and this one took my breath away. I do that all the time...reread old notes or letters or emails or even text messages so I could relate to this poem really well. I haven't read any of your work in a long time, but my lord you really are improving Dear! |