Maybe its just cos it's late right now, but this made me cry. I just love how you wrote this. Excellent word usage. It was just perfect. I love everything about it. This is one of my new fav. poems now! =] Keep writing hun!! Love ya!

` Liz

Wonderful poem. The glow was excellent and emotion was deep.
Keep it up 5/5

:Sarah:

This was such a sad, heart filled poem hun... very well written... 5/5 xx

Sorry not been on recently but will try and catch up with all the recent [hmmm or lastest I think being the appropriate word ASAP]

This was an amazing poem!! So beautiful and touching. i loved the wording. It was just perfect. Awesome job!

Ciao Darling! You commented on one of mine so I decided to repay you and this one took my breath away. I do that all the time...reread old notes or letters or emails or even text messages so I could relate to this poem really well. I haven't read any of your work in a long time, but my lord you really are improving Dear!

The ending wrapped it up perfectly, it's the typical teenage girl poem, and I love it! I adore this piece, I give it a 5/5 :D

Ooh that was powerful i really liked it
5/5

Love really hurts.. but love will also make us pick our shatterd life..

Wonderful write. The rhymes where good as well as the flow. Like I said before you tend you use the rhyming scheme aabb, you should try switching it up sometimes maybe do a rhyming scheme of abab. Over all great poem.

Peace, Joe

Once again I am amzed withur work.. I loved everysingle one! good job.. you are very talented at heart! I hope you never forget that and never stop writing good job and keep it up well done 5/5