Voices

by Fredy   Mar 20, 2007


I hear strange voices inside my head,
over the years so many lies I've fed...
that my life is one big lie
and it won't reveal itself 'till the day i die.

but returning to the voices,
could be my choices...
screaming at me: don't do it anymore!!
or do it the same way you did it before
it has shaken me to the core,
and at a point where i don't know what reality is anymore.
it wouldn't recognize it even if it knocks at my door.

all day this voices cry and cry:
reality, why won't you die?!?
and they killed it, they won,
my mind is now gone.
I'm insane
I'm sorry this is how my life ends.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This is a deep and powerful piece. i loved it. very expressive and i liked the writing style you used, quite creative. i must say i can relate to this. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Steph

    Another comment from me lol - i can actually understand the poem better now since learning more about schizophrenia and what it's like to go through it - you put it down brilliantly!

  • 17 years ago

    by Marylou L

    I like your sense of style. You laid out that poem brilliantly. I could feel the emotion as if it were warm syrup. Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Steph

    Hey Fredy this poem is brill!!! keep up the good work!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Man this is f-ed up. Great job with the peom a little too depressing for me.. 5/5
    -vino

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