I like it!! ;) its too sexy for the page for the page lol!! just kidding imhyper ehehhee but really i like it

This is brilliant!!!

Sounds like a horror story. Not saying that to be offensive or anything. It shows excellent promise overall! 5/5

Man this is f-ed up. Great job with the peom a little too depressing for me.. 5/5
-vino

Hey Fredy this poem is brill!!! keep up the good work!!!

I like your sense of style. You laid out that poem brilliantly. I could feel the emotion as if it were warm syrup. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Another comment from me lol - i can actually understand the poem better now since learning more about schizophrenia and what it's like to go through it - you put it down brilliantly!

This is a deep and powerful piece. i loved it. very expressive and i liked the writing style you used, quite creative. i must say i can relate to this. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.