by Daniel J Mar 20, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Down upon the Earth below, |
by Jaime
Nobody chooses better words than you do, Daniel. Despite the fact that it was a metaphor, you described a beautiful scenery that could have made a great poem in itself. |
by Gem
I understand how it could be a love poem but i may be interpreting it differently to how you meant, lol. |
by Angie
Well, I understood its meaning long before I read your notes at the bottom. It's a beautifully written poem, powerful as well. You're a nice addition to our club, welcome. |
by chavii
Beautiful poem ,enjoyed reading it. One can feel the deep meaning in the lines. |