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by Kelsey Mar 20, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / other
I want to be like the leaves Flying through the air. I want to be free And without a care. I want to be happy Like little ones in the sun I want to be free And I want to have fun. I want to smile Like I did when you were here. I want it to come freely And I want it to come with cheer. I want to be like a bird Flying high up in the clouds. I want to be free And I want to be proud. I want to be like The trees. I want to be free And to be able to sway in the breeze. I want to be free. It'd be a dream come true. I want this wish to come to me. For being free is like a book overdue.
by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG
Good job with the rhyming and the rythem. I liked the poem 5/5
by kaiLa
Well.. i would love to be free anytime... (like that'll happen) :(
by David
Trees and breeze. wat wonderful words to use together. well done and good luck. 5/5 David