Comments : I want to be free...

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Trees and breeze. wat wonderful words to use together. well done and good luck.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by kaiLa

    Well.. i would love to be free anytime... (like that'll happen) :(

  • 17 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    Good job with the rhyming and the rythem. I liked the poem 5/5