Comments : Once upon a Time

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    Great job on this piece so very sad :(

    She wants to be herself,
    But she doesn't know who that is,
    The only life she knows,
    Is the one she once lived.

    Your words ring so true. Loved this.
    Excellent!
    Thinking of you.
    Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    The words said by others,
    Have never meant a thing,
    But no longer can these feelings,
    Be held deep within,

    aaah such a deep and sad feelings i loved ur poem take care

  • 17 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    This touches a place in me...amazing