It seems like this is more of a stroy than a poem, but most of my poems tend to be stories or experiances in my life as well so I love it! I'm enjoying the fact that it is leaning more towards teaching a lesson and is a topic that almost everyone can relate to because of the variety between stanzas. Only thing I may change is the "like" your used before love in the first stanza, It just clashes with the line slightly and sounds a little better without it. Other than that and even with that it is a good read and I really enjoyed it! 5/5! =) keep up the good work!

I like the way its written. Very...experiance wriiten

That sounds just like me and my ex... i wish i could forget him, but its not that easy.... great poem 5/5