by *Amanda* Mar 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
The way you hold me makes me feel strong again, |
This crazy world has tainted my innocence beyond belief (My favorite part of the poem.) |
by PygmyPuff
There is so much passion and vivid detail that it makes the reader feel as though they are there experiencing it with you. However, as the poem goes on the strength of the structure fades. |