by I Seem to be the Heartless Mar 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
All our actions have consequences. |
by Alicia Jane
Its funneh how u would give anything for one person. =] i like |
Ma favorite |
You had a nice flow going, and I think the free-verse was a good choice, since I don't think "Consequential" rhymes with anything. :) The use of punctuation in this poem was rather nice, it helped the flow a lot. |