Hey thats very good, i like it, the structure and style and wording, its all superly done. xxxxxxxxxxx

I really like this, I could relate to how you felt, how strong you feel for this person that is really special. If you want a place to really let some emotions out or submit your poetry, or maybe even make some friends come check Azurerain.com/forum out. :)

Strong poem, great writing. I can really feel your emotions, your pain, your anger and your grief.. well done! and take care ...

Wow. its kinda like you took the anger side out of me in this poem. i like it alot. im glad that you can relate to my other poems. thank you for the comments. great job with this. 5/5 for me

I f-n love this poem! when i read number 1 i was kind of curious if i would like it or not. but then i got the hang of it and i loved it! it is amazing! 5/5