by Curry Mar 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
She loves it when you look at her with those gorgeous eyes, |
OMG i loved this poem soo much. you're so talented. plz do me a favor and look @ some of miine. and keep writing!!=] |
Another wonderful write.. the word choice and rhyme scheme was nice.. the lines were a bit too long and make it difficult to find the flow however.. once i got it it was a very enjoyable read .. great job :D |