by Kelly Mar 20, 2007
category :
Fun, humor /
about society
This craving i feel is strong and unrelenting, |
Excellent poem , and great flow , wording was wonderful, sad, but we all have that problem at least I know I do, thanks great write keep up the good work, your friend Tracy dean 5/5 |
I like it and yes i crave it too. another fine piece of work chick keep it up x |
by Krzysztof J
I like the ending :) i guess we all need a distraction at work :) dunno about the lack of money never had that problem but this is a nice poem 5/5 :)) |
by Cathy
Good poem Kelly I know what you mean. I get the same way after I pay bills and all that money I made at work is gone in the blink of an eye that sucks! |
by Gem
You know what Kel? |