by Curry Mar 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I love being with you, |
Aww.. this poem is cute.. the rhyming is much better and you describe your love very well... my only suggestion is to try and be a little more creative... there were quite a few cliches in this piece |
by Cindy
Great job on this poem. Your love really shines. |
by GraCiE
This poem is soooo sweet. the flow is a bit random in places.. but i think its what makes it. its raw and natural and the words and rhyme seem to fall into place...well done!! and keep up the cool work x x x |
I really love this poem. Good job on making it rhyme. 5/5 |