I really love this poem. Good job on making it rhyme. 5/5

This poem is soooo sweet. the flow is a bit random in places.. but i think its what makes it. its raw and natural and the words and rhyme seem to fall into place...well done!! and keep up the cool work x x x

Great job on this poem. Your love really shines.
Take care Cindy

Aww.. this poem is cute.. the rhyming is much better and you describe your love very well... my only suggestion is to try and be a little more creative... there were quite a few cliches in this piece