XxCutting,Hurting,KillingxX

by Curry   Mar 20, 2007


Shes cutting,hurting,slowly killing herself,
Everyone tries to stop her,
But nothing will help.
There's a stream of blood dripping down her arm,
She thinks this is helping her pain go away,
But it's only causing her harm.
Now she's lying almost dead on the floor,
But she doesn't care,
She only wants more.
More pain,
More shame,
More hurt,
More getting pushed into the dirt.
She thinks it's all so great,
She feels no love for herself,only hate.
So she keeps on cutting,hurting,killing,
As she's lying in a puddle of blood.
Soon she will no longer be living,
She wants to die in this flood.
Now she can hardly breathe,
She cant even see.
But she still keeps cutting,hurting,killing,
Everyone has given up on trying to help her.
The knife is her only friend,
She just wants her life to end.
So she keeps cutting,hurting,killing,
Finally she feels it,
Her heart is starting not to beat,
She thinks he mission to kill is almost complete.
So she screams out her last words,
"Thanks to him Ive lost this fight,"
"Thanks to him I die tonight."
She wants to say more but she cant,
Its like theres nothing left in her head,
Maybe its because...OMG! Shes dead...

written by:curry on 3.10.07

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  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Wonderful poem...i totally relate to it...

    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This is by far the best poem of yours i read. I think u do really well writting sad poems to love poems but in my opinion sad and dark are always alot stronger. Well done with this the imagery was quite unique. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    With honesty, I'm not really found of cutting or sucidal poems. Some are good because: though they share the same topic, they are written differently than the rest. Yours was (no offense) common. Perhaps some metaphors and similies will help

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    The emotion in this poem is spectacular however the rhyming scheme is totally scattred the first 3 lines dont rhyme at all it then goes to everyother line and then to everyline... and afterwards it just contuines being scattered .. other than that it is filled with emotion :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey,
    Thank you for your comments on my poems there much appreciated! ANywyas all the itme when you wrote;
    "cutting,hurting,killing,"
    I think it should of been cutting, hurting, killing" it would just look less clutered.
    Anyways i loved that repition, it worked really well and extended the point you made. Anyways the flow was good and good vocabulary. So yeah a good read, keep it up! xx

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