The rising sun

by xXx Allison xXx   Mar 20, 2007


Look from here to the rising sun
golden rays against the pink
an individual future on the horizon
threads of light, like bleeding ink
golden fingers touching the ground
wavering moments that give us hope
caressing each raindrop, each cloud

to be just like the sun!
to kiss each morning anew
a wish that calls each and every one
to gaze upon the neon brew
the mixture of color warmed by light
a gift from the lord of the morning
look to the rising sun, your future is bright.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bridget

    This poem made me feel so confident about life you know.. the sun was a great thing to use to get the right effect. And it worked perfectly!

    "threads of light, like bleeding ink"

    this line seemed to just jump out at me when i read it. Like bleeding ink, those 3 words were simple yet so effective.
    This created vivid imagery, and because it was nice and short it gave out the message that was in it very strongly. It's perrfect.
    5/5
    :D

    ~BRiDDY~

  • 17 years ago

    by poisonmist

    Very nicely written. i love your word choice. keep writing, you have talent.

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