Very nicely written. i love your word choice. keep writing, you have talent.

This poem made me feel so confident about life you know.. the sun was a great thing to use to get the right effect. And it worked perfectly!

"threads of light, like bleeding ink"

this line seemed to just jump out at me when i read it. Like bleeding ink, those 3 words were simple yet so effective.
This created vivid imagery, and because it was nice and short it gave out the message that was in it very strongly. It's perrfect.
5/5
:D

~BRiDDY~