Wow this poem is so different to your other poems but i love it! it's so unique..
Repeating hands at the start of each verse was very effective. You are really talented and in this poem it shows because it's like words of desperation at the start so when I read it it was like full on if u get what i mean.. and then it calms in the middle. That was really creative thinking. And how you repeated the 1st verse again at the end worked perfectly.
the ending was strong and very effective although it was just one word. but how you wrote it as a question was brilliant!
5/5
keep up the awesome work, and keep the great ideas coming!!

~BRiDDY~