This Feeling*

You did really good on this poem.
I gave you a 5/5.
Take care!

I get this funny feeling
every time you walk passed
wanting just to talk to you
my heart beating fast.
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I loved this stanza.
It was just about perfect, except you wrote passED instead of pass.
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've never had this feeling before
it's like my stomachs dropping to the floor
every time I see you
this feeling only growing more
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Once again, just about flawless.
You should either have it
feelingS or growS. instead of growing, because it would be easier to comprehend.
and, also instead of it's you should have it, and instead of stomachs you should have stomach.
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what do I do
to get the courage to talk to you
how hard is it
to just do what I want to do?
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No mistakes whatsoever.
And, I loved it. :]
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to walk over to you
and just say hi
how can't I do this
I just can't see why?
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How come, would fit better in the third line, BUT, how fits just fine..
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You did an amazing job with this poem, just a few tiny things you could do to make it flow better.
I loved the poem, though. :]
4/5

Ahhh i no how you feel missy! it isn't good either! you did an amazing job on this poem with expressing your feelings great job!

This is really good. but in the second line i think passed should be spelled past..but im not sure. but anyways good writing!

Aww! This poem is sooo cute and lovely! I loved it!

I feel the same way when "He" passes... Or I felt.. Before... Ok sorry I just flowed into my toughts.... lol

keep up the good work & take care :)