Painted Figernails

Another short one by you, but I think ou picked the title perfectly when deciding to focus on something so obscure as fingernails... very unique, I loved it.

Ok, I didnt find this to be overly descriptive at all, The funny thing is Sheena if you took some of the discription out of it people would be telling you there wasnt enough. But no i found this poem to be a beautfully sad piece of work. A job really well done here ~mel

I read some of ur poems, and there good.
~emS~ xxxx

I really liked this :) i can capture the feeling of it. Great job :)

I'll admit, not one of my favorites. It's a shame too-original sad poems are usually top on my list to read and I loved yours in the past. It felt like you were trying to put too many descriptions in one line at a time--sometimes less is more to capture and audience's attention--and establish what you are trying to say and how you say it. It's better to have a simple in depth sentence then a wordy descriptive one. Just find your balance : )