That was good 5/5

Awww thats good keep writing xxxxxxxxx

Lovely poem

Thank you im glad you liked it

Mmm, it i s an amaizing poem , but for poems , in my beleive that it should not be a one big blick because the eye of the reader afriad and bored to read , i would prefer you split into couplet or stanzas

it will be perfect

great work