by Tylor Dent Mar 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I can see the tears forming around your eyes. |
by ketaki
Good well written |
by ketaki
Good well written. |
by BlueJay
I was having a bad day and my friend read me this piece, not only do I love the way they read it, but I love how you wrote this too. I think the rhyming scheme was interesting and they style you chose was well penned. Great use of emotion and wonderfully written |
by Tylor Dent
Thank you very much I appreciate that. I'm glad it could make you feel better. Someday when I'm upset I come back and read it as well. |
by Cindy Miller
Very well spoken, I think we've all felt this, once, twice...and some still. |
This was beautifully worded. It had wonderful fluidity. Amazing peice of writing! |