Don't just love me

by MyDevotion   Mar 20, 2007


Why say the word love
When what we have is so much more
This isn't just another good time
Holding you up all above,

All we've ever had
All the times you've gotten mad
All over now
Keep your chin up, wow

You did it
Kept up with it
You're everything I've ever wanted
And that's become apparent,

You're my girl
And I know you love it when I say that
I'm your boy
And I love to hear that,

I'm leaving this one up to you
Make our lives feel brand new
Take me on your journey
And make me feel worthy,

I want to see you and how you are
When it's not just another day in your car
I want to feel how you feel
I want to know just what it is that makes you smile,

Stay a while
Show me what it means to be happy
Your smile is contagious
You have made me the happiest man alive,

A good time
Is just what we need
Feels good to be free
Only you and baby only me!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Ok, The flow was off during this poem i think its because some lines were to short making the syllable count mixed up all over the place. The ryhme scheme well half the time their was the ryhme then it just went. And when you ryhmed your ryhmed "it" with "it" which through me off this poem. IF you change some of these things then im sure it would have potential to become a really nice love poem. A good effort with this tho!

  • 17 years ago

    by Travis

    This is good! The first few lines really hooked me into reading it! Keep it up.

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