One chance

by leah j   Mar 20, 2007


You only have one lifetime
and just one heart to share
one chance to find sweet moments
of tender loving care.

you have one chance to hold someone
and just one chance to let them know
how much you really love them
more than words and deeds could show.

one chance of castles in the air
a place to build your dreams
a partner who,ll be at your side
when lifes not all it seems.

i cherish every moment
i,m yours to have and to hold
the tresure of the love we share
means more to me than gold .

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Also, I think that the first stanza was my favorite...that's all.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Very, very nice. I would've voted it a 5/5, but I raraey do that, so I gave you a 4/5 instead.

    Anyway, this piece was sweet, innocent, beautiful and pure, and it was all done with a wonderful flow. The fact that it's short too doesn't hurt either, lol. Good job...I think.

    Brad

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    That was very nice.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Very beautiful!! keep up the good work your doing great...5/5:)

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