Very beautiful!! keep up the good work your doing great...5/5:)

That was very nice.

Very, very nice. I would've voted it a 5/5, but I raraey do that, so I gave you a 4/5 instead.

Anyway, this piece was sweet, innocent, beautiful and pure, and it was all done with a wonderful flow. The fact that it's short too doesn't hurt either, lol. Good job...I think.

Brad

Also, I think that the first stanza was my favorite...that's all.

Brad