The Sweetest Thing

by PygmyPuff   Mar 20, 2007


This love was like no other,
It was so much more than just a kiss.
Entangled in the strength of his embrace ,
Taking me there with expertise and pleasure,
Sensing my surrender
Our bodies close,
And our hearts beating so fast
With quivering touches and heartfelt desires
Im drowning in his heat,
As we blend into one.
The whispered breaths,
Light as a feather,
And laughter echos like chimes.
The sweetest thing.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    WOW this poem is awesome! the flow is so great! and the imagery is...just..wow.. 5/5 5/5 5/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    What a wonderful experience!

  • 17 years ago

    by Drusus Bathory

    Yes I agree with the last comment about the flow. I think we share an individual problem indeed. The use of language in such a well mannered way on the topic in question however, I personally thought was wonderful.

    Drusus

  • 17 years ago

    by the love of another fills my soul

    Very intense..defenite real emotion. nice work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I love this poem...

    there is so much love in it!

    the flow is brilliant & the wording is perfect...

    GREAT JOB!

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