This is a really good poem it almost made me cry it was very nicely written and I would love to read more

Fantastic poem! well done its very well written and i really like it. keep writing please xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Thats so sad...i think when it doesnt work out its not that we lack somethign tis jsut that the otehr person couldnt handle what they had and thats noting to be ashamed of...wow great stuff wouldve liek to see more imagery caus it was prose but i really enjoyed this style nice job.

melissa

AWWW THIS IS SWEET 5/5

Truly amazing && very well written.
i loved it
-deadbeatromance

Aw i luved it. I like how you told the girls point of view and the guys.

Awwwww so sad... amazing poem or kinda story.. Loved it! :)

A definite 5/5 i loved how this poem flowed.