Far away

by Travis   Mar 21, 2007


I sit here on the stairs,
Thinking about my love.
Of all the days I sat there,
Staring into the gentle blue eyes,
That make me smile.

But now I can't do it,
I can't see her face,
Not so much anymore,
This distance is too much,
Too much for me to bear.

I want to brush my hand,
Through the soft brown hair,
That lay on my chest before,
When I saw you all the time,
And we had so much fun.

All the times we shared,
Pass right before my eyes,
As I walk down this path,
Down to the depths of the dark,
To find the one thing I need.

To find a way to get,
The distance to dissapear,
And to see your face again,
To get lost in those eyes,
And thin the distance that keeps me,
Far away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by MyDevotion

    Wow I am surprized with this! When I started reading it I thought, "hmmm I don't know it seems choppy." But as I continued on I realized that it really portrays ones feelings for another! good job! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    First off, cause you said it: NICE FORESHADOWING!!!!!!!

    my analytical/deep comment begins here:

    first stanza- it's so soothing and just gentle.

    second- the transition is like ZAAPP. wake up from dreamland hun

    third- its last two lines felt rushed.

    forth- ooh. the imagery is cool. the depth in it is nice.

    the last- this poem ends beautiuflly!

    5/5

    screw all typos!!! <3 =]