First off, cause you said it: NICE FORESHADOWING!!!!!!!

my analytical/deep comment begins here:

first stanza- it's so soothing and just gentle.

second- the transition is like ZAAPP. wake up from dreamland hun

third- its last two lines felt rushed.

forth- ooh. the imagery is cool. the depth in it is nice.

the last- this poem ends beautiuflly!

5/5

screw all typos!!! <3 =]

Wow I am surprized with this! When I started reading it I thought, "hmmm I don't know it seems choppy." But as I continued on I realized that it really portrays ones feelings for another! good job! 5/5!