Twisted Beginning.

by Your Best Mistake Your Perfect Failure   Mar 21, 2007


Hate me for breathing
Hate my heart for bleeding
Hate me for believing
Hate the thought that you could love me

A mended heart .
once, ripped apart
No longer left in the dark-
-ness-
On my own
loving you: a weakness i'll never show

A drunken rage
fills the page
and another page
of the thoughts lies and pain
never to the streets broadcast : main
-stream America..

It takes your love to live
everything i have i'll give
no longer broken and inconsiderate

without you by my side
my heart, or what's left shall die
my love for you
is no lie.
I
love.
You...

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  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow intense and i love how you use your stanzas and make them stick out...

    (example)No longer left in the dark-
    -ness-
    On my own
    loving you: a weakness i'll never show

    great stuff, definatly keep writint and never give up. best of luck.

    melissa

  • 17 years ago

    by heather

    Hey hey! i think that was very good. awesum job!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Such dark and inviting, loved this poem. the flow was magical. yes, magical and dark!

    5/5 David

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