Hey great job on this one...its different from a lot im used to. Nicely worded and really made me feel the emotions! I'm about to enter a new poem called Here so when you get the chance please read it

I loved this one. I was really good and I love the way you showed emotion and help the reader live the experience. It was really good! Keep up the good work!

@!Jezzika!@

Hey...u go to HP? what school?

Btw scots rule. i hope you like my poem we cna't live on our own

Nice topic and very good poem.
5/5
Keep it up...

Josie