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by GoodMorning   Mar 21, 2007


I breathe in deeply
My own pathetic attempt
To make myself whole again

Nothing has sufficed
Please, tell me, is it hopeless?
Will I ever feel alive?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This is brillant. I love how simple this is, but the pain behind it is so complex and strong. Nice work. Nik

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Naww.... Brittnayy.. This is sooo sad....

    Are you okay?

    We havn't talked in so long. I really miss all the chats we use to have. ;[

    Stupid work has dragged me away from youuuuu... lol.

    We really need to catch up.

    Awesome sedoka though. Very nicely done!

    I love you.

    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I've said this before.
    But I adore the first stanza thingy.

    Well done wifeypooo<3

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is a good poem. well done, its a good talent you are showing so keep it up. hope you are ok. take kare xxxxx

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