World of peace.

by BlueDreams   Mar 21, 2007


World of peace comes
When we each shed the light
fueled by love as a weapon
No longer a need to fight.

The bombs can stop dropping
But for that unity must exist
without global unity
War and strife won’t fail to persist.

It’s fueled by greed
With competition, hatred and fear
drop the mass consumerism
There's enough resources for everyone here.

When did the value of one life
Become more important then another?
Testing new pharmaceuticals on Africans
When we all share the same eternal mother?

Our priorities are out of line
instead of making change, we're digging our graves
A Modern world, with laws shaping equality
yet there still exists slaves?

Polluting mother nature
Reaping her of her bountiful grace
Even with us as the protesters own foolish actions are the authorities maze.

We're blinded, not by the truthful light
But by the veil that covers our eyes
the false fabrication of life in this system
It only contributes to our demise.

What's needed now is for us all
To open our eyes and see the guiding light
To always be consciously aware
And make the truthful choice in what's wrong and right.

To view our own lives
Choices from an outsiders lens
to share peace, spread love
Give generously, and make amends.

If you don't believe in religion nor God
Know that the true religion of God is love
With love as the true compass of your life
All your trials and tribulations can be risen above.

Let that love foster, reach unimaginable heights
And spread it in humble ways
Let it bring light to any darkness
Bring beauty to all of your days.

Now sit back and think about peace
And ask yourself how you can contribute to the path
Peace is inevitable, add a bunch
Of positives to a negative; you do the math.

Peace to you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    First of all I wanna thank you for writing this piece.

    Fsams analysis of your poem:

    Heading:

    The headind World of Piece is 100% cohesive and relavent to the content of this piece. The aspects outlined in the poem reflects back to your caption. Great!

    Poetic qualities:

    The flow and the rhythm is nice in this piece. The poem is written in stanzas so I think it would be better if you split the line "Even with us as the protesters own foolish actions are the authorities maze." in to two.

    Content:

    Your poem covers a wide range of aspects reflecting the caption and outlining how piece and harmony can be restored to make the world a pieceful place.

    Remarks:

    The poem is well structured and of great poetic quality.

    Rating: No doubt I should give you 5/5

    Your reader
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by becca

    This is so true! the meaning and moral of the poem is so clear and inspiring and this gives it such depth. a great write! thankyou xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Very inspirational Bert...a wonderful & heartfelt write as always.....wonderful job....
    hugs, Ann

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    Well, it certainly is good to read you again my friend. Hope all is well with you. This write is quite powerful and brings forth a message that the world needs to hear. Very inspirational indeed. Welcome back my sweet and hope to read more of you soon. Do drop me an email when you get the time.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethan

    I liked this poem however certain parts weakened it I felt, such as 'War and strife wonâ??t fail to persist.' I think would sound better pherhaps as desist. And a couple of other lines I felt were slightly long. Overall though a beautiful positive message, true sentiments and a good wake up call.

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