by Black night Mar 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
*This is a song I wrote after my ex dumped me at a party, its a bit melancholy, but i was a bit drunk when i wrote it, and was pretty depressed. Also its a load of crap - partly to being slightly drunk* |
Ah... |
by Baby Rainbow
Wow i think it is an amazing talent that you can write songs, wish i could. you have made this very well written and i think you should keep it up xxxxxx |
by Br0k3n
Hehe thnx for the comment ^.^ . I really apperciate it. And btw it's not me & my friend I'm writing about, imaginary situation :). It was an old poem of mine I re-wrote. |
by Br0k3n
Aww this is sad. And I'm sowwie she dumped you that way. Anyway, looking at it as a lyrics, it's great and would make a good song, you just need few more sentances in the end. |
Thats so sad, i'm sorry that you were dumped at a party like that it stinks. but that was well written and i liked it alot keep writing |