Lonely

by Black night   Mar 21, 2007


*This is a song I wrote after my ex dumped me at a party, its a bit melancholy, but i was a bit drunk when i wrote it, and was pretty depressed. Also its a load of crap - partly to being slightly drunk*

Lonely,
so lonely.

I'm standing here
in this alleyway.
because she took my heart
and she threw it away.

And now I'm here,
In the dark and the rain,
and theres no one around
to dull this pain

Chorus:
because she left me
oh, she left me.
now my light has gone
gone, all gone away...

I'm falling
like the rain on my hair
because i cant feel my heart
all I feel is despair

Chorus:
because she left me
oh, she left me.
now my light has gone
gone, all gone away...

Will this ever end
will she change her mind
could this wound be healed
could this heart ever mend

Chorus:
because she left me
oh, she left me.
now my light has gone
gone, all gone away...

Now my life
has all gone away....

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  • 17 years ago

    by Flying Phoenix

    Ah...

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow i think it is an amazing talent that you can write songs, wish i could. you have made this very well written and i think you should keep it up xxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Br0k3n

    Hehe thnx for the comment ^.^ . I really apperciate it. And btw it's not me & my friend I'm writing about, imaginary situation :). It was an old poem of mine I re-wrote.
    Thankies again and I'm waiting for new poems :)
    Much love, Br0k3n

  • 17 years ago

    by Br0k3n

    Aww this is sad. And I'm sowwie she dumped you that way. Anyway, looking at it as a lyrics, it's great and would make a good song, you just need few more sentances in the end.
    And you're welcome ;)
    Much love, Br0k3n

  • Thats so sad, i'm sorry that you were dumped at a party like that it stinks. but that was well written and i liked it alot keep writing