Thats so sad, i'm sorry that you were dumped at a party like that it stinks. but that was well written and i liked it alot keep writing

Aww this is sad. And I'm sowwie she dumped you that way. Anyway, looking at it as a lyrics, it's great and would make a good song, you just need few more sentances in the end.
And you're welcome ;)
Much love, Br0k3n

Hehe thnx for the comment ^.^ . I really apperciate it. And btw it's not me & my friend I'm writing about, imaginary situation :). It was an old poem of mine I re-wrote.
Thankies again and I'm waiting for new poems :)
Much love, Br0k3n

Wow i think it is an amazing talent that you can write songs, wish i could. you have made this very well written and i think you should keep it up xxxxxx

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