Blue Skies; A-line.

by Ironic Allure   Mar 21, 2007


Blue skies, A-line, hello sunshine.
through your broken bedroom window,
the golden sun burned down the sky,
and now the light is in your eyes,
what do you have to say for yourself?
all the clouds had hidden your words,
but now you've opened up the world,
everything's found its way back home.
i wish the city would hush its sound,
maybe then you could see some sense,
it's the hardest thing to find in your head,
think in reverse; maybe it's found.
it doesn't matter if you're writing songs,
when you're empty on the weekend,
hanging on some gravity pull,
watching the world from the bright side,
metal fingers can't scrape the sky,
misplace the motion in the rhyme,
this isn't lost it's just out of order.
and i can see the wind outside,
the trees were born to show me so,
i know how to shine from underground,
i share my secrets with the sun,
the branches aren't obstructing,
they're just pointing at the obstacle.
so if you're dreaming of solutions,
you've not got the talent.
if you're dreaming of the weather,
you'll find the river flows back wards.
it's not too late to make mistakes,
they're souvenirs of your wrong turns,
you must be up to something,
because i know the sunshine burns.
make a move, I'll try to stay awake for this.

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  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Very unique poem indeed. I really enjoyed reading it.

    Again, the structure is not to my taste - and you haven't capitalised your I's again, lol. But nonetheless, it was well written.

    "you'll find the river flows back wards." -- 'backwards' is all one word.

    My favourite line? - "The golden sun burned down the sky," - I love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    LALALA.
    I WAS, AS MY NANNY LIKE TO PUT IT, 'TOURING THE SOUTH OF FRANCE'.
    even though i pretty much was barely in the south. but WHATEVER. ;]
    we just had a fox in our garden, i went press on his arse and got about 20 photos.
    SUP PIGLET?

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    Bestfromyou.EVER.

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