Bestfromyou.EVER.

LALALA.
I WAS, AS MY NANNY LIKE TO PUT IT, 'TOURING THE SOUTH OF FRANCE'.
even though i pretty much was barely in the south. but WHATEVER. ;]
we just had a fox in our garden, i went press on his arse and got about 20 photos.
SUP PIGLET?

Very unique poem indeed. I really enjoyed reading it.

Again, the structure is not to my taste - and you haven't capitalised your I's again, lol. But nonetheless, it was well written.

"you'll find the river flows back wards." -- 'backwards' is all one word.

My favourite line? - "The golden sun burned down the sky," - I love it.