This was a great message. I hope that if it were a true situation that you would be wise enough to let go. I have been in that situation many times and held on being naieve to what was going on. I knew but wouldn't let myself believe it. Great Job on this.
Dixie

Wow, powerful poem, yet strong pain and hurt love came through...beautiful in so many ways, with a bit of edge .....great flow

----tara

Very well done on this! I loved it. It was very powerful and it flowed very well. I especially loved the ending, it went very well with the rest of the poem. This deserves an 8 but since it only goes to 5 lol I'll vote a 5! Well done on this. Keep it up!