Alone and Forgotten

by Hannah Emellia   Mar 21, 2007


(wrote this outta boredom... I don't really like it, but... i hope you do. XP )

You're sitting all alone,
Inside a crowded room,
Unnoticed and forgotten,
Forever all is gloom.

You think you want the sunshine,
But, you're happy in the rain,
Your tears say you can't take it,
But, inside you love the pain.

They all say that they love you,
But, that doesn't mean they care,
Now you're forced to only wonder,
Was life truly ever fair?

Maybe you should end it...
End the pain that owns your soul,
Just take a little poison,
And let poison take it's toll.

You're sitting all alone,
Inside a crowded room,
Unnoticed and forgotten,
Forever all is gloom.

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  • 17 years ago

    by AMoreMIo

    Its really good .....i dont have a strong interest in suicide poems...but it was really interesting and good

  • 17 years ago

    by Cooper

    Absolutely well done. The second stanza I must say is my favourite, as I find the deepest and most truthful. Some of your best poetry.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww wow i like it very much well done xxxxxx