A very sweet poem.
Nice job.

Wow, this is a wonderful poem, beautifully writen. 5/5 ~Sam~

I really enjoyed it and thought it was a good read. I especially lilked the way you formatted the piece, I think something as little as the structure of a poem can completely change the effect of it and in this case it worked quite well for you. These lines really caught my eye,
"you hear the pain as
your love cascades
like
rain."

I did think though that the lines,
"hold back the
tears,
I just hand you
my tears"
sounded a bit repeatative and "Tears" could have been substituted with another word in the second line.

Overall I thought it was a lovely read, good job

Think that this is absolutly great and enjoyed it very much though i do agree with Michelle in what was said about the repitition of "tears"