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by BrixGoesxRawr
Wow, hun. That was great. It flowed very well & nothing seemed forced. It had a lot of emotion in it, as well. Replaying conversations That were best left unsaid Discovering illicit relations Happening in her own bed ^ This was my favorite stanza. Absolutely amazing, darlin'. Bri [x]
by Jenni Marie
Beeeeeautiful. Powerful words, perfect imagery, flawless flow. The first stanza hadme hooked, the rest just kept getting better and the last stanza was such a perfect ending. As I said before, beeeeautiful!