I really like this poem, keep up the good work, I think that I like sort of feel like I can relate to it errr something...

Well this is one of those poems that just kinda doesnt make sense to me....which doesnt mean it isnt good because I think that it is good in like a mysterious way. Keep on writing. 4/5

I really like it! thank you for commenting my poem, you gave me this title because you wrote one based on roses are red. i think that yours is much better. and on your profile, you say you dont tell even your friends who you are, but my sweet dear, you have just told me exactly who you are in that short paragraph. you are just a fake person trying to act like you dont care because you want people to notice, and belive me, i would know, dont fake who you are, be yourself, only then can someone really love you

my sympathy
bekka

This is not a comment on my poem, this is a response to the comment above.

thanks for the comment bekka, but the rest of that was just mean! seriously, "my sympathy, bekka" thats just plain mean.

I love this poem

This is very good great job 5/5

Your pretty rad at writing.

This piece is fantastic. Though parts fail to make sense the overall piece is terrific. I hope many other people like this piece as much as I have. Definatly a 5/5 here and you have written yet another unique and creative piece that is filled with sorrow, devistation, and clear strong voice. A voice that really shows who you are.