Sixteen you say?

I am very impressed, you will be a force to be reckoned with by the time you're my age.

You are clearly already showing an understanding of the language far above your age. I am jealous.

Drusus

Dude that was really good much better than mine.....mine r so short oh well..that was long but amazing....very GOOD GOOD!!!

~xmeghanx~

Thanks for the comment. this is a really good poem!! XXXX

Sorry for your loss

Im so sorry for your loss!
this was a very amazing poem
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i loved it!

I'm sorry for loss and i would like to say that is a great way of putting your feelings out it really sends out a message to everyone

Nice. wow, that was AMAZING!! it seems really like just from the heart. ( i know that sounds cheesy). It like rhymes sometimes and then doenst other times, so it makes it really unique. and thanx for the comment, greatly appreciated. â—‹â—‹Peaceâ—‹â—‹

Nice. wow, that was AMAZING!! it seems really like just from the heart. ( i know that sounds cheesy). It like rhymes sometimes and then doenst other times, so it makes it really unique. and thanx for the comment, greatly appreciated. â—‹â—‹Peaceâ—‹â—‹
P.S. if this sends twice, im sorry

This was a great poem, a little harsh at the end but you spoke your feelings and that deserves a lot of credit. I can understand how you can be so angry about losing your friend like this. Im sorry for your loss, nothing can erase the pain but things will get better through time. Again very good poem! 5/5

Wow that was good!!! i love how you didnt hold anything back and poured your heart into it!!

WOW.. im extremely amazed that's an awesome poem , and i see that you have a clear understanding about what your writing keep it up its great i love that poemm :) xoxox ohh andd thanx for thee comment *muAhh*xox

Wow you are amazing, those words run deep into your thoughts. Let God take care of your friend now, you will always have memories, but live your life.

Wow. that actually had me crying. I am shund for words right now. The poem is very sad and I think you explained your feelings perfectly. I am extremely sorry for your loss. When bestfriends die, something inside of you dies because they are called "best friends" for a reason. They are apart of you. Suicide to me is selfish. They are not thinking about all the people they are leaving on Earth left to mourn and to fall.
But either way, this is an amazing poem and I am gonna read the others you have written. They are breathtaking. Keep writing.

I loved this poem its so sad but sooo good keep it up.im soz about ur loss.

Love jess

Wow!! Girl that is crazy that is a EXELENT EXELENT poem... Truley amazing.. I feel that way to girl im so sorry she left you... You really can feel the anger in this one it is soooooo good i cant get over it but yes again im here if you wanna talk...

This is really good. I could feel everything in your words. Your friend is in a better place right now where she is happy, but i understand what your feeling. Keep up the good work.

Wow! that poem was awsome...i am jealous..I wish i could write like u do. Keep up the great work

Wow this is very deep. i dont know what to say but wow. i hope you can get through this.
Leona

Wow Amazingg You Blew Me Awayyy I Loved It Your An Amazing Writer 5/5

Thanks for the comment, i really like this poem, it is exactly the way me and my dad felt when my uncle commited suicide.