Comments : This One Girl

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww honey thats really good, i relate to it aswell, thanks for sharing and keep it up xxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good and full of emotion 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Krysten

    I REALLY Really liked this, it was like you were staring stright into my soul, the flow was a little weird at first, but after a few stanzas i really got into it. IF this is true about you and everything i just wanted to let you know, that you have a friend here to talk to

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Beautiful...i feel like this sometime. i love this poem...it is so true. the very last line is great! 5/5

    xoxo kisses

  • R u sure you didn't write this about me...I absolutely loved it and can totally relate...
    this has nothing to do about the quality of your poem but it had two typos...
    *thatall
    *towhy
    I loved it...great work...
    Jonda Mullins

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    5/5 Excellent poem! its so sad [in a good way] i feel just like that.. *sigh* awe..

  • Beautiful work. I can relate to thispoem as well. Your work is amazing. I feel like that girl sometimes. But I know others have it worse, so I try not to dwell in self pitty. If you know what I mean. Anyhow, 5/5 definitely.
    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by Casey Lynn

    Please keep writing! You have a great talent!