This poem is fantastic and I love the way it reads. The words you used were powerful while keeping the poem short and sweet. excellent job 5/5

This one is absolutely beautiful. I love how I can picture everything so vividly. You make everything so well known in such a short amount of words. I love that, if it makes any sense at all. Ha.. Awesome job. 5/5.

Thanks for the comment by the way. It really helped a lot. You definitely know what you're doing. :]

Another beautiful poem. There isn't one unnecessary line here, they all add something to make a phenomenal image. The imagery in the first stanza is excellent. The line brakes are also very clever. Great Job.