I loved it.
It made me want to cry.
And, it had good flow, and it was so emotional, and it's easy to relate to.

Amazing Job!!!
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5/5

Awwwwwwww! rainy! this is beautiful! comeplete reminds me of one of my best childhood boy- friends (we were never actually together, but i know he still likes me even now) and he always cheers me up, its like, impossible to be around him and not be happy. I don't ever really crying infront of him either. its true, whenever were together. nobody cries. that is so sweet. i'm so glad you too, have a person like that for you. don't loose em k?;) luv you big sis, wolfy.

This made me want to cry it reminds me of my kids we do this when we see each other we try to forget all the sad stuff and just focus on us being together and live in the moment

Comment #5~
I loved this whole stanza
His smile, his laugh
Every secret, pout,
I cherish, deep down
His jokes, his sweetness
Penetrate ice
I think the last line was the coolest phraze, very nice job!
~Midnight Sun

Oh this poem is good.loved the ending.
take care
and best wishes