I loved it, very original and interesting. "Joe digs" reminds me of trevor haha.

Great work.

--Steph

Hm. Very interesting.
You don't rhyme the end of the line, yet it [does] rhyme and flows every well. Nicely written. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

It is good, well done. Its interesting but somehow you can't help but feel you know it. I like that, its a powerful tool.

Drusus

Sorry to be a nit-picker, but in the first stanza you wrote he had a backyard and in the second one you wrote he lived in an apartment. Sort of inconsistant, but it was a good poem. Something different to read..

I liked this one a lot...the ironic tone works well. and to comment on the comment above ^ I live in an apartment and have a backyard!! lots of people do! it might be shared, but its still a backyard!